Bug 27114 - MageiaWelcome Live mode English improvements
Summary: MageiaWelcome Live mode English improvements
Status: RESOLVED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Mageia
Classification: Unclassified
Component: RPM Packages (show other bugs)
Version: Cauldron
Hardware: All Linux
Priority: Normal normal
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: papoteur
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Reported: 2020-08-14 17:29 CEST by Martin Whitaker
Modified: 2020-08-25 08:39 CEST (History)
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Source RPM: mageiawelcome-2.02-1
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Description Martin Whitaker 2020-08-14 17:29:33 CEST
Some suggestions for improving the English text:

1. Welcome tab

"a few important information" -> "a few important pieces of information"

"help you with to go" -> "help you to go"

2. Live mode tab

"This support allows" -> "This mode allows"

"or after booting like now" -> "or after booting into Live mode (like now)"

The paragraph starting "Any customization..." -> "Any customization, including installation of additional software, will only survive until you reboot the system, unless you have added a persistence partition.

"Documentation of installer" -> "Installer documentation"

3. Install software tab

The paragraph starting "The next slide shows..." is wrong - the applications tab is not shown in live mode. If that is intentional, then "You can find a more detailed list here:" also needs to be changed.

4. Install tab

"Are you ready for installation?" -> "Here you can choose to permanently install this Mageia system on your computer. Any customizations you have made before launching the installer will be included."
Comment 1 papoteur 2020-08-16 07:11:50 CEST
Hi Martin,
Thanks for the review.
Which documentation is included within Live media? I provide a link to it.
Comment 2 Martin Whitaker 2020-08-16 09:45:59 CEST
Hi Papoteur,

The MCC and Live Installer manuals are included within the Live Media (in all languages).
Comment 3 papoteur 2020-08-25 08:39:01 CEST
Release 2.03 has these improvements.

Status: NEW => RESOLVED
Resolution: (none) => FIXED


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