Bug 27114

Summary:	MageiaWelcome Live mode English improvements
Product:	Mageia	Reporter:	Martin Whitaker <mageia>
Component:	RPM Packages	Assignee:	papoteur <yvesbrungard>
Status:	RESOLVED FIXED	QA Contact:
Severity:	normal
Priority:	Normal
Version:	Cauldron
Target Milestone:	---
Hardware:	All
OS:	Linux
Whiteboard:
Source RPM:	mageiawelcome-2.02-1	CVE:
Status comment:

Description Martin Whitaker 2020-08-14 17:29:33 CEST

Some suggestions for improving the English text:

1. Welcome tab

"a few important information" -> "a few important pieces of information"

"help you with to go" -> "help you to go"

2. Live mode tab

"This support allows" -> "This mode allows"

"or after booting like now" -> "or after booting into Live mode (like now)"

The paragraph starting "Any customization..." -> "Any customization, including installation of additional software, will only survive until you reboot the system, unless you have added a persistence partition.

"Documentation of installer" -> "Installer documentation"

3. Install software tab

The paragraph starting "The next slide shows..." is wrong - the applications tab is not shown in live mode. If that is intentional, then "You can find a more detailed list here:" also needs to be changed.

4. Install tab

"Are you ready for installation?" -> "Here you can choose to permanently install this Mageia system on your computer. Any customizations you have made before launching the installer will be included."

Comment 1 papoteur 2020-08-16 07:11:50 CEST

Hi Martin,
Thanks for the review.
Which documentation is included within Live media? I provide a link to it.

Comment 2 Martin Whitaker 2020-08-16 09:45:59 CEST

Hi Papoteur,

The MCC and Live Installer manuals are included within the Live Media (in all languages).

Comment 3 papoteur 2020-08-25 08:39:01 CEST

Release 2.03 has these improvements.

Status: NEW => RESOLVED
Resolution: (none) => FIXED